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Script & Story Coaching

Turn a great idea into a great script

I'm a working screenwriter who's written 10 produced feature films for Lifetime, Hallmark, and Tubi, and I've spent my career developing stories that actually make it to the screen. Along the way, I won the Grand Prize in both the ScreenCraft and Launch Pad Pilot Competitions, was a semifinalist in the Austin Film Festival Screenplay Competition and the Disney DGE Fellowship, and have earned 8s on The Black List for both pilots and features.

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Talking scripts is my love language. Story structure, character arcs, dialogue that pops, second acts that refuse to cooperate—I’m obsessed with the puzzle of The Screenplay. If you're stuck, I want to figure out why, and help get your script back on track.

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Whether you're outlining your first screenplay or staring at draft five wondering, “Wait...why did I fall in love with this idea in the first place?" I'll help you identify what's working, fix what isn't, and build a stronger, more compelling story.

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My goal is to help you become a stronger writer by providing honest, actionable feedback and practical tools you can use long after this project is finished. Together, we'll create a screenplay you're excited to send to managers, producers, directors, contests, and fellowships.

If you want to

  • Create a solid, structured outline

  • Finish your screenplay

  • Fix a stuck second act

  • Strengthen character arcs

  • Solve story and pacing problems

  • Break through writer's block

  • Prepare your script for contests and fellowships

  • Develop a polished, professional screenplay ready to submit

Free 20-Minute Consultation

Every coaching relationship begins with a free 20-minute Zoom consultation where we can discuss

  • Your project

  • Your goals

  • Where you're feeling stuck

  • Which coaching option is the best fit for you

No pressure! This is simply a chance to talk about your story.

Story Development Coaching

Single Session — $100

A one-hour Zoom session focused on exactly what your project needs.

Topics may include:

  • Story structure

  • Outlining

  • Character development

  • Scene planning

  • Breaking through writer's block

  • Next steps for your screenplay

Perfect for writers who need clarity and momentum.

Monthly Accountability Package — $350

4 coaching sessions (Save $50)

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Ideal for writers who want ongoing guidance and accountability while developing a screenplay or TV pilot.​

Together we'll:

  • Set achievable writing goals

  • Solve story problems as they arise

  • Stay on track toward a completed draft

  • Build a stronger script week by week

Script Notes

Feature Screenplay Notes — $500

(Up to 130 pages)

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Includes:

  • Full script read

  • Written feedback (minimum one page)

  • Story and structure analysis

  • Character notes

  • Strengths and areas for improvement

  • Commercial viability feedback

  • 60-minute consultation to discuss the notes

TV Pilot Notes — $400

 

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Includes:

  • Full script read

  • Written feedback

  • Story and structure analysis

  • 60-minute consultation

Development Package — $650

For writers looking for notes plus guided development.

Includes:

  • Full script read

  • Written notes

  • One-hour notes consultation

  • Two follow-up coaching sessions

Value: $700

Perfect for writers ready to revise with ongoing support.

Rewrite Package — $1,200

Writing is rewriting. This package is designed to support you through the revision process.

Includes:

  • Initial script read

  • Detailed notes consultation

  • Second draft read

  • Follow-up notes consultation

  • Two coaching sessions

Instead of receiving notes and figuring it out alone, you'll have guidance through the rewrite to make your script stronger and more market-ready.

Andrea helped me find the heart of my story again. I’d lost it somewhere in all the drafts, and I'd lost any motivation for another attempt.  Her accountability package was a perfect way to stay diligent during the dreaded rewrite process.  We addressed recurrent problems from earlier versions and devised an attack plan for my next draft.  I am forever grateful. Thank you, Andrea!

Brittany Deventer

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